'This place'

'This place'
K

Kenn

Registrant
When Im in pain
Theres this place I go
It seems Im there
Before I know

Whats made me move
Inside or out
Makes me scream
With never a shout

Id like to yell
Till my throat got hoarse
But it's not likely I will
Being so composed of course

Its a confusing place
But comfortable too
Being at ease in pain
Ive become accustomed to

Its not a pain
Rate it one to ten
But an ache, a dread
Of what to do when

Pain subsides
Or I get distracted
And start to believe
Ive over-reacted

My fate unsure
The end unwritten
I could fall in love
Or at least be smitten

But how could I love
When Ive always questioned
How things could be,
Details not mentioned

A secret between friends
Is safe with me
But a secret pain
Wont set me free.
 
Geez, Kenn,

This is really good, can I move it to the poetry section, as well. I can leave it here, too, I just thought you'd like to share it for what it is...good poetry.

David
 
Sforgotten about there being a poetry section. Thanks for the feedback.
 
Kenn,

I sent your poem over to the Poetry section but have left this open, as well, so that others can comment, either place.

You write well,

David
 
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