In and Out (Moderate Triggers)

ODAT

Registrant
In and Out
In and Out
Now you see it
Now you don't

Bend me over
Pants on Fire
Fill me with your hose
It's a streetcar called desire

Forever linked
To the trauma
Pants pulled down
Here comes the drama

In and Out
In and Out
Now you see it
Now you don't

"You'll love it till I'm done
Get ready, here I come"
In and out
In and out

The shock and lust
Now bound together
Not just for today
But the start of forever

It's been 50 years
Since you took me from behind
No peace or serenity
Can I ever find

I still see it in my mind
In and out, in and out
Then I disassociate
Now I see it, now I don't

A young boy
Filled with laughter
Pants down in shame
Until the hereafter...
 
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A young boy
Filled with laughter
Pants down in shame
Until the hereafter...
None of us should have our innocence and joy robbed from us.
Well written!
 

Iv0_An

Registrant
This poem is like a picture. Raw picture of emotions and sensation, which I believe are familiar to many of us. This part is what grabbed my attention the most:
The shock and lust
Now bound together
Not just for today
But the start of forever
Because it's true. Abuse remains forever with us. One way or another. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
 

AlexBoyd

Registrant
@ODAT In this poem you have merged the sexual mechanics and rhythms with a childlike simplicity that is quite effective in conveying your boyhood experience. Nice job.

Now you see it,
Now we see it.
 

ODAT

Registrant
@ODAT In this poem you have merged the sexual mechanics and rhythms with a childlike simplicity that is quite effective in conveying your boyhood experience. Nice job.

Now you see it,
Now we see it.

Thanks, Alex. Your poems inspire me
to keep writing…
 
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