Haiku attempt


Congrats! You did it.
That's a good one, and yes painful too. It builds up. And the last line... I can feel it.
The two people who inspired me! Thank you both! I admire what you both write, and I thank you guys for the encouragement. It helps me to write. My poems I write come off as being written by a demented Dr. Seuss, but my therapist says they are written by my inner child. I think she’s trying to make me feel better! Thank you again my friends.


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hey rick. you did a great job that is a difficult style. it speaks to where we tend to live. and shows determination to share I hope we see more to come
Thank you newground! My new sickness is all thoughts are now coming like this, and my wife says she sees me counting syllables with my fingers!