Confused clarity

[OCN]

Confused clarity as I struggle with the insight
Wondering whether i'm in the dark or in the light
It still doesn't make sense, nor does it make me free
But all the recent discoveries help me to be me
Identifying the fake i realize what is true
Enjoying who i am even though i don't have a clue
I trust that one day i get through to my inner core
And realize what i've been fighting for

 

[Shyshark]

Excellent poem.

I'm happy to see your positive spin on the process.
Optimism is of course dangerous at times ...
but if you give up on hope ...
you give up on life.

 

[OCN]

Excellent poem.

I'm happy to see your positive spin on the process.
Optimism is of course dangerous at times ...
but if you give up on hope ...
you give up on life.

Thanks for the headsup Shyshark!

I've found out through the years that my tendency is to end any poem with a positive note. Guess it's like a personal reminder to myself that everything's just fine, even though it may not appear that way.

Lately been working on some personal issues and the change of perspective is refreshing yet challenging. I tried with this poem to put that change of perspective into words