Let's write a senryu together - Part 1

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Let's write a senryu together - Part 1
presence of absence
a shadow on the window
here and there but not
 
@.aseity
thank you for the latest senryu :)

@ABSurvivor1975
thank you for participating!
That's a beautiful image you paint there in three lines.
 
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Two more beautiful Senryu, thank you @.aseity
 
@.aseity
and three more beautiful ones.
You really like writing senryu, don't you :)
 
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;)
 
your friendly arm around my shoulder
you held me tight
there was no need
now I know
you weren't a friend at all
 
cry into the void
forehead against the mirror
see his black hole face
Thank you, as always, .aseity :)

your friendly arm around my shoulder
you held me tight
there was no need
now I know
you weren't a friend at all
Lino, what a wonderful little poem!
It's not a senryu, but I added it to the senryu anyway :)
And I feel the pain that comes forward from between the lines.
Thank you for posting your poem!
 
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