Let's write a senryu together - Part 1
Thank you, as always, .aseitycry into the void
forehead against the mirror
see his black hole face
Lino, what a wonderful little poem!your friendly arm around my shoulder
you held me tight
there was no need
now I know
you weren't a friend at all
thank you!Thank you, as always, .aseity
Lino, what a wonderful little poem!
It's not a senryu, but I added it to the senryu anyway
And I feel the pain that comes forward from between the lines.
Thank you for posting your poem!